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Senin, 20 Februari 2012

Fell in the Bathroom

Last week, me and my friend made a appointment to went to Jimbaran. We rarely went there.together because we always bussied. Now it's time to us to went to Jimbaran. We agreed to went to Jimbaran at 6:30 a.m. My friend were arrived at Pos Office for waiting me, but I not yet came to there. The time showed at 7:30 a.m and I not yet came to there. Immediately, my friends came to my house to picked me up. At that time, I was sleeping in my bedroom. Then, my friends woke me up. I rushed to bathroom that rhere is much foam because my mother was washing clothes. I slipped and my head bumped a wall and my friends laughted at me.
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  1. ulfatul lutfiyah24 Februari 2012 pukul 17.49

    NAMA : ULFATUL LUTFIYAH
    NO.AB : 30
    recount text nya sudah bagus cuman generic struktures nya susah dipahami,grammarnya yg kalimat now its time to us to went to jimbaran kayak e salah...

    BalasHapus
  2. Adham Azulgrana24 Februari 2012 pukul 18.42

    Reviewer : Adham S / 01

    1. "me and my friend" harusnya "my friend and i"
    2. perhatikan lagi grammar dan penggunaan huruf kapital pada kalimatnya.

    BalasHapus

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